Monday, April 30, 2012

Victim


I was a loner, 
I felt scared, 
I wake up and I can't trust anyone, 
I 'm trapped in this vicious cycle, 
I felt like I was the ugliest person in the world, 
I almost wanted to kill myself, 
I was sobbing, 
I'm still scared, 
I would cry myself to sleep, 
I'm not exaggerating, 
I used to keep things bottled up, 
BUT NOW, 
I've smashed that bottle. 

Speaker: Victim 
Audience: All other victims. 
Message: Don't keep it all to yourself. Stand up for yourself. 

Sunday, April 22, 2012

Digital Chapter

In the end of the Chrysalids, Michael promised Rachel to retrieve her from Waknuk and that they will go to Sealand together. So I think that we should give them a better ending. David, Rosalind and Petra already went to the Sealand, but Michael is still with the Fringes and Rachel is in Waknuk. This is a short ending only for Michael and Rachel, it will make them more involve and important in the story. There was already enough trouble for David, Rosalind and Petra, so there's no need to give them more problems. Michael is a key character in the novel and it will be better for the novel is there's an ending for them too.